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Garon E. Whited

"Funeral" by Garon E. Whited

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Funeral

 

Midnight in the chapel sounds with bells so soft and slow;

The mourners all are homeward bound, while angels hover low

To comfort one beside the casket, dry as dust within.

Swathed from head to foot in black—her?  Or is it him?

But weeping all is done today; dry eyes met sunset’s sweep.

Now the wind is in the branches; the thunder’s loud and deep.

The casket trembles at the sound, and the mourner, too.

The lightning lances brightly down, a flash of white and blue.

Does the lid twitch?  Does it rise?  Is there life within it yet?

Or is it wishful thinking to call out “Hail!  Well-met!”?

Hands move swiftly nonetheless to lift the lid aside;

The shadows of the casket work to confound the eyes.

But the lance of heaven strikes again with a blaze of holy white;

The figure there is cold and pale, unmoving in the light.

The mourner’s hope fades with the bolt, but not the sudden pain.

A lover’s gone from out this world— and tears fall with the rain.

The mourner sinks upon the stones and leans upon the beir.

Full weeping, hands before the face, a veil soaked through with tears.

The wind is strong and sets the shutters to flap like awkward birds;

The dead one in the casket cannot hear the living’s words.

“I love you,” were but three; “come back!” another two.

Other words as well were spake, of need and bitter rue.

“Don’t leave me all alone,” was said; “rather I had died.”

“Thy peaceful death is envied, for I am crucified!”

And full-throated broke the storm upon the chapel’s door;

Shingles rip’d from off the beams, rain pattered on the floor.

The mourner’s veil torn loose, set to an airy flight;

The hat is gone, the hair whipped free—and out are all the lights!

But all falls still; the storm is quiet as quick as ‘twas to rage.

The mourner lays beside the beir, feels the touch of age.

And then a touch within the dark—gentle, soft and kind.

As once another touched—or is all within the mind?

“Don’t mock,” the mourner says, in pain and bitterness.

“I’ve grief enough; I’m worn out.  Just… let me rest.”

“Of course,” comes back the echo, soft and hard to hear.

“Rest, my love, and be unafraid; for even now, I’m here.”

In morning light they came to bear the corpse’s bones away

But halted at the sight they saw in the new-born day.

The body thought once to be dead had moved within the night;

It held the hand of the newly-dead—some said a death of fright.

Others shook their heads, or crossed themsleves to pray.

The sexton shooed out all but one, to help square things away.

“What shall we do?” his assistant asked, standing well aside.

“We’ll bury ‘em,” the sexton said.  “Put ‘em both inside.”

Ten thousand years and more those bones have lain all intertwined;

Pay no heed to mere flesh that once had drunk the wine.

No, regard the finger-bones, my lad, and the arms all wrapped tight.

No one would have done but them; all else had too much fright.

You can say of these long-dead two: they, at least, had tried

To live a life all in love—and that love has never died.

←- Sally of the Moor | Rooms of Ruin -→

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24 Jul 2004:-) Alissa 'Silver' Sokolski
You have a way with words.

True love is such, in life and in death, that it makes one live.

:-) Garon E. Whited replies: "Precisely. It's a theme I return to over and over!"
25 Jul 200445 Snowfox
Beautiful! If I try to write a poem of any kind it would turn out like this:
'This is a very short poem
It was made by a very short gnome
The End'
Not very good compared to yours! Anyways I love this poem. I'm not much into poetry but this is really good!

:-) Garon E. Whited replies: "Thank you! My field is really prose--I do much better when I don't have to try to have a sense of timing . . . but I am glad that you enjoyed it."
25 Jul 2004:-) E Purington
Aye, true love indeed. It is a nice thought to think that that kind of love really exists. Oi, don't make me eyes all teary again! Nah, I'm not much for cryin', but your stories get at that deeper meaning...Love is a many splendid thing.
'Tis a wonderful thing to be able to grasp that meaning in lyric and print.
Oh yes, rhyming was brilliant as is everything you write!
Cheers 12
-Catach Amadan

:-) Garon E. Whited replies: "Poetry: Lyrical prose.
I'm still working on my scansion, though. Some people move their lips when they read; I mumble along as I -write!- Well, when I write poetry. It's the only way I can manage rhythm--or something like it."
1 Jul 2005:-) C. 'Liari' Seidel
*smiles softly* Sweet and sad, and perfectly splendid. Wonderful writing, Garon. Truly.

:-) Garon E. Whited replies: "I'm much more of a prose writer, but a good writer should be able to turn his keyboard to anything... but thank you for saying such nice things! *is pleased!*"
27 Jan 2006:-) Simi Landau *Muffin Queen*
Aww, nummy. Sad and very pretty to read! Not all of the writing is perfect, but if you could write such brilliant prose and perfect poetry, you'd have to hide in the basement for fear of angry mobs of lesser writers. 2

:-) Garon E. Whited replies: "Well, I'll keep practicing. When I have angry mobs of lesser writers howling for my blood, I'll know I've got it right... 2"
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'Funeral':
 • Created by: :-) Garon E. Whited
 • Copyright: ©Garon E. Whited. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Eternal, Funeral, Love
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions, Romance, Emotion, Love
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